drafts, kavarna: Fixes

diff --git a/drafts/000-kavarna.markdown b/drafts/000-kavarna.markdown
index 8498a67..048a370 100644 (file)
--- a/drafts/000-kavarna.markdown
+++ b/drafts/000-kavarna.markdown
@@ -46,7 +46,7 @@ class="thumb" src="/uploads/2019/09/cadrilater-12-thumb.png"> </a>
 
 Well, there's also a castle tower in this last one, so as to not bore
 the reader. Also to keep the reader scrolling -- I heard that's the new
-cool business nowadays bringing tons of those benjies in the purse,
+cool business nowadays, bringing tons of those benjies in the purse,
 keeping folks swipin' on their smartpnojes -- I present to you some sky
 shots, now also with birds!
 
@@ -128,11 +128,11 @@ class="thumb" src="/uploads/2019/09/cadrilater-21-thumb.png"> </a>
 
 Above: a plaque with some dude's name on it. Y'know, it occurs to me
 from the mediocre hotel service that the main difference between
-Bulgarians and Romanians are that the former are at least trying to be
+Bulgarians and Romanians is that the former are at least trying to be
 helpful, while the latter are just fucked in the hea... wait, haven't we
 heard [that][klausenburg] before? Numerous times, I've stopped counting.
 
-Anyway, no other difference between the two people other than the
+Anyway, no other difference between the two peoples other than the
 language. Thus I've used this trip as yet another occasion to expose
 myself to Kiril's writing, which means that by now I should at least be
 able to read Stan's Russian quotes a tad faster. No one said anything