posts, 09e: Further small changes

diff --git a/posts/y06/09e-tmsr-work-v.markdown b/posts/y06/09e-tmsr-work-v.markdown
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@@ -27,7 +27,7 @@ and it looked like this. First, the stuff that burns:
 > * feedbot has some new patches that [need to be merged][feedbot]
 >   into the current working tree.
 
-And as for the stuff that isn't (or wasn't) burning (yet I still found
+And as for the stuff that isn't (or wasn't) burning (yet I still find
 important):
 
 > * [file pastebin][pastebin];
@@ -44,9 +44,9 @@ important):
 >   much of this I'm going to finish during this lifetime, so at some
 >   point I'll just sit down and re-prioritize.
 
-I also had a plan for the following few weeks in fact more than that,
-but plans tend to change along the way. Anyway, the short-term plan,
-word for word, was:
+I also had a plan for the following four or so weeks -- in fact more
+like the next eight, but plans tend to change along the way. Anyway,
+the short-term plan, word for word, was:
 
 * Week **36**: genesize Hunchentoot and [everything
   else][sbcl-and-others] required to run it, save for the operating