posts, 09e: Small update

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@@ -76,8 +76,9 @@ Lisp stuff is other people finding it useful. Is there anyone else in
 the house who finds any use for this?
 
 I also agree with [Alf's comment][alf-headbashing], there's tons of
-(burning) problems out there to solve, not like I need to add more on
-my plate. So then I'm asking, dear forum, what do?
+(burning) problems out there to solve, not like I need to add extras
+on my plate. So then I'm bringing this before the wisdom of the forum:
+what do?
 
 [^1]: I actually have this broken down into pieces, let's look at it.