drafts, 08a: Minor massage

diff --git a/drafts/08a-feedbot-i.markdown b/drafts/08a-feedbot-i.markdown
index 822faeb..298e4a3 100644 (file)
--- a/drafts/08a-feedbot-i.markdown
+++ b/drafts/08a-feedbot-i.markdown
@@ -138,8 +138,12 @@ To test feedbot feed checker functionality, simply run:
 > (defvar *feedbot*
      (make-instance 'feedbot:feedbot))
 > (feedbot:feedbot-start-checker-thread *feedbot*)
+> (feedbot:feedbot-get-or-create-feed
+   *feedbot* "http://thetarpit.org/rss.xml")
 ~~~~
 
+then sit back and relax.
+
 [^1]: Achtung! Spoilers below:
 
     At the moment of writing, Feedbot is supposed to comprise three
@@ -163,16 +167,16 @@ To test feedbot feed checker functionality, simply run:
 
     ~~~~
     $ wc -l *.lisp
-      294 feedbot.lisp
+      296 feedbot.lisp
        28 feedbot-utils.lisp
        26 package.lisp
-      348 total
+      350 total
     $ grep '^ *;' *.lisp | wc -l
-    101
+    103
     ~~~~
 
-    Translating this: about one third of the code is made up of
-    comments.
+    That is, comments comprise about one third of the code. This is
+    roughly similar to [other republican code][ffa-comments]
 
 [^3]: These so-called "recipients" are for now completely meaningless
     and thus useless. So why add them? Let's explore the possibilities;
@@ -203,8 +207,9 @@ To test feedbot feed checker functionality, simply run:
     although experience shows "better" tends to arrive at the problem of
     "worse" [after a while][worse-is-better].
 
-[^4]: For now, the announcer is a stub code that prints to standard
-    output whenever new entries are posted.
+[^4]: This "so-called" announcer is supposed to notify recipients of new
+    content whenever it's posted. For now, the announcer is a stub that
+    prints new entries to standard output.
 
 [feedbot]: http://btcbase.org/log-search?q=feedbot
 [botworks]: /posts/y05/080-botworks-regrind.html
@@ -213,4 +218,5 @@ To test feedbot feed checker functionality, simply run:
 [manual]: /posts/y05/081-feedbot-manual.html
 [feedbot-checker.vpatch]: TODO
 [feedbot-checker.vpatch.spyked.sig]: TODO
+[ffa-comments]: http://btcbase.org/log/2019-01-29#1890573
 [worse-is-better]: http://btcbase.org/log-search?q=%22worse+is+better%22